It is probably best not to spend too much time focussing on the past. Move to the
present quickly, so that you can get to the point of the letter (which is what you
intend to do).
Presently, my work pivots on . . . reflects . . .I deal with a state of . . I purposely . . .
.I sift throughIn most of my work I draw attention to the phenomenological, to time
and space, both physical and psychological. Tracks, or records of presence, fascinate
me . . .As for the methodology I follow . . . I experiment . . .I am currently working
on installations that rely on the everyday traffic or flow of people through space . .
By half way to two thirds of the way through the letter, you should be moving on to
what you intend to do in graduate school.
While in graduate school, I would like to investigate the concept of dwelling by
focusing on the symbolic language of architectural ornament in relation to our
identity. . . If I am accepted into UBC’s Interdisciplinary program, I will continue to
focus on . . . Because of my interest in research, the thesis option appeals to me. . .
Through historical research, I intend to create a series of sculptures by
reconstructing the strength and vitality of a symbolic language that has been
abandoned by modernism and replaced by the chaotic reality of technology. . . Given
that experience and memory are formed through all our senses, I hope to extend
this “sensual” awareness beyond the visual — to examine how touch, smell, sound
and taste register our environment and play major roles in the way we perceive and
process the information received.
If you have a clear sense of how you will incorporate certain theories into your work,
what courses are of interest to you or why the studio space, the technology, the
faculty will enhance your studies, it may be important to let them know. If you are
interested in teaching, and that is a possibility, say so.
The contemporary focus of the Ceramic faculty, the spacious facilities and the
dynamic atmosphere of an art department within a larger university, such as the
University of Regina, will provide a stimulating environment to conduct further
critical research into architectural theory and ornamentation. . . Currently, I am
enrolled in an Art education class with the hope of having the opportunity to partake
in a Teaching Assistantship. . . I would also like the opportunity to utilize my Arts
Administration and curatorial experience by working in the university gallery.